Jared Diamond is on
track with his theory that civilization growth only comes from being
geographically lucky to a point. Where he was wrong though, is that’s not all
that matters. There is more to Civilization then just being rich or poor, or
whether you have a lot, or you have barely anything! The real meaning of geographic
luck and Civilization growth is the domesticate animals you have, the animals
that help support you and help you live like goats and sheep because they eat
the leftover crops and make room for new ones to grow. Also, cows, because they
eat some crops, they have a lot of meat and skin, and they’re huge and strong
and can pull plows easily on a farm. The reason these characteristics matter in
a domesticated animal is because if the animal is small, doesn’t eat crops, and
weak then you won’t have a large amount of meat to eat, a lot of hide for
shelter and clothes, or something to help you work and pull the heavy stuff.
Civilization is more recent and took thousands of centuries to fully develop. Another
feature of civilization growth is the tools and weapons that were available at
the time and climate because that affects the growth of plants and crops which
are food and the rain can be used as drink. About 14,000 years ago was the
worldwide human race of present day when tools were being made with very strong
stone. Prehistory was divided by tool development. Later on, metal replaces
stone, bronze replaced metal, and iron replaced bronze. Now we currently use
iron for a lot of our tools! Hunters, fishers, gatherers of edible plants,
sheltering in caves/temporary huts/or in the open as long as the climate is
nice, were all popular throughout the Paleolithic Age! The people of the
Paleolithic Age formed small groups to find food, protect themselves, and protect
their children which had to be breast fed at the time and because of that, they
couldn’t produce as many so there were very few children at the time. With this
disadvantage of few children, women actually liked to be able to hunt and be
the powerful one in the family like the men! This all goes back to the
Civilization growing mainly because of the socialized workers, technology,
materials for tools, large population, climate, crops, and domesticated
animals! The people living during these ages struggled with little technology
like we have now, but most of them managed to pull through and survive!

Great essay, Ficcette. It appears that you really like to write, which is certainly going to help you out in high school and especially college. Nice work!
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I do, I always write too much! But thank you
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